I really like these, especially the unexpected and sudden line "court date tomorrow". But I'm not telling you how many syllables "complained" has in it. Maybe for a large fee. It's not three, though. It's less.
Anonymous mancriticizes your haikus:Too much staccato
comp-la-ined....or should that be comp-lained?
The first haiku is excellent.
Thank you, I am rather fond of it myself.
com-plained is how I say it. Two syllables
I have given it some thought and decided that for once you may be right...that does sound more correct, so I changed it.
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